Spiderman 3
1.I'm going to ask MJ to marry me
2.We have some new information. This is your uncle's actual killer
3.Everynbody needs help sometimes Peter
4.Revenge is like a poison that can take us over.
5.We've all done terrible things to each other
3/5
聽說這是很棒的電影～只是我沒看過～
2007年5月28日 星期一
評語～
Focus & Meaning STUDENT19, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 3 for focus. Focus relates to your ability to present a consistent, unified message and stay on topic. Your focus is limited. Typically, a response at this level has a reasonably clear purpose evident, though the presentation may stray from the controlling point. The response may lack focus and cohesion.
STUDENT19, let's work on making your focus much clearer.
Revision Goal 1: State the central/controlling idea of your essay.
1. In your introduction, you should include one sentence that tells your reader what your essay will be about. This is called your thesis statement. Highlight it in yellow.
2. If you did not write one sentence to explain what your essay will be about, ask yourself, "What do I want my reader to learn from my essay?" Now, write the answer in one sentence at the beginning of your essay.
Example:
Before Revision: The Redwood National Forest in California has many hiking and biking trails.
Frank's Strategy: I wrote details about California, but I did not write a sentence that explains what my essay will be about.
After Revision:The Redwood National Forest in California is a spectacular place to visit.
Frank's Reflection: I wrote one sentence that clearly states what my essay will be about.
Revision Goal 2: Understand and write for your audience.
1.Read the prompt and find the audience. Are you writing for friends and students, for parents or other adults, or for newspaper readers?
2.Make sure the words you wrote in your essay are appropriate for your audience. For example, if you are writing to adults, you should NOT use slang or contractions.
Example:
Before Revision: I wanna go hiking in the Redwood National Forest. And after that I dunno. Maybe I will chill on a park bench.
Frank's Strategy: I used slang words, "wanna," "dunno," and "chill." I need to replace these with more formal language because I am writing to adults.
After Revision: I want to go hiking in the Redwood National Forest. After hiking, I may relax on a park bench.
Frank's Reflection: I replaced slang words with more formal words, "want to" and "relax." Activities and Resources
STUDENT19, let's work on making your focus much clearer.
Revision Goal 1: State the central/controlling idea of your essay.
1. In your introduction, you should include one sentence that tells your reader what your essay will be about. This is called your thesis statement. Highlight it in yellow.
2. If you did not write one sentence to explain what your essay will be about, ask yourself, "What do I want my reader to learn from my essay?" Now, write the answer in one sentence at the beginning of your essay.
Example:
Before Revision: The Redwood National Forest in California has many hiking and biking trails.
Frank's Strategy: I wrote details about California, but I did not write a sentence that explains what my essay will be about.
After Revision:The Redwood National Forest in California is a spectacular place to visit.
Frank's Reflection: I wrote one sentence that clearly states what my essay will be about.
Revision Goal 2: Understand and write for your audience.
1.Read the prompt and find the audience. Are you writing for friends and students, for parents or other adults, or for newspaper readers?
2.Make sure the words you wrote in your essay are appropriate for your audience. For example, if you are writing to adults, you should NOT use slang or contractions.
Example:
Before Revision: I wanna go hiking in the Redwood National Forest. And after that I dunno. Maybe I will chill on a park bench.
Frank's Strategy: I used slang words, "wanna," "dunno," and "chill." I need to replace these with more formal language because I am writing to adults.
After Revision: I want to go hiking in the Redwood National Forest. After hiking, I may relax on a park bench.
Frank's Reflection: I replaced slang words with more formal words, "want to" and "relax." Activities and Resources
Effects of Technology
The network technology has change human life, in the modern society; the network has not only become a part of life, but become tools that people communicated with people.
After the computer invents, it make human life progress, no matter do everything, can use the computer to help you to finish the work more fast and intact, the quality of the life that makes too is raised day by day. “Internet” is another great invention after the computer, you can greet to the friend beyond thousands of kilometers through the network, and it can looking for innumerable knowledge in the network too, also look for the girlfriend too.
But product a lot of social concerns behind that brought convenience, for example, the network swindles, addiction to the internet games, doesn't care about the things of surrounding area , and neglect the homework etc..
It is convenient that internet technology is brought to us, but must carefully in we use by it, could make human society progress for future.
After the computer invents, it make human life progress, no matter do everything, can use the computer to help you to finish the work more fast and intact, the quality of the life that makes too is raised day by day. “Internet” is another great invention after the computer, you can greet to the friend beyond thousands of kilometers through the network, and it can looking for innumerable knowledge in the network too, also look for the girlfriend too.
But product a lot of social concerns behind that brought convenience, for example, the network swindles, addiction to the internet games, doesn't care about the things of surrounding area , and neglect the homework etc..
It is convenient that internet technology is brought to us, but must carefully in we use by it, could make human society progress for future.
2007年5月24日 星期四
4月份空英問題(2)~
1.Have you ever experienced a natural disaster ? What happened? Describe your experience.
ANS:No, It is very hard for me to imagine it happenning at my side.
2.Which natural disaster do you think causes the most harm? Why?
ANS:Earthquake , He has caused at most the people is injured with the dead.
ANS:No, It is very hard for me to imagine it happenning at my side.
2.Which natural disaster do you think causes the most harm? Why?
ANS:Earthquake , He has caused at most the people is injured with the dead.
4月份空英問題(1)~
1.Which one of these facts about trees is the most interesting to you? Why?
ANS: Trees are the longest living thing on earth . The world's oldest trees are more than 4500 years old. Therefore can know how small the man is.
2.Have you ever seen any fascinating or famous trees ? If so, describe them.
ANS: Supernatural wood in Alishan He is that the oldest tree of Taiwan is the biggest tree too.
ANS: Trees are the longest living thing on earth . The world's oldest trees are more than 4500 years old. Therefore can know how small the man is.
2.Have you ever seen any fascinating or famous trees ? If so, describe them.
ANS: Supernatural wood in Alishan He is that the oldest tree of Taiwan is the biggest tree too.
2007年5月15日 星期二
5月份空英問題～
1.Why was Operation Smile formed ? Would you like to be a medical volunteer and help a child?
Ans:Dr. William P. Magee and his wife Kathleen . They saw children with cleft lips and cleft palates, and they used surgery to fix those children's faces. Yes, Iwill.
2.How do you think children's lives are being changed after they have surgery for cleft lips ?
Ans: They have new future~ they will meet more friend.
3.Which organization belongs to NPO in Taiwan ? Can you learn form it and describe your volunteering ambition ?
Ans:Red Cross , lionsclubs .Yes , I learn that help people is a great thing of the world .
Ans:Dr. William P. Magee and his wife Kathleen . They saw children with cleft lips and cleft palates, and they used surgery to fix those children's faces. Yes, Iwill.
2.How do you think children's lives are being changed after they have surgery for cleft lips ?
Ans: They have new future~ they will meet more friend.
3.Which organization belongs to NPO in Taiwan ? Can you learn form it and describe your volunteering ambition ?
Ans:Red Cross , lionsclubs .Yes , I learn that help people is a great thing of the world .
2007年5月14日 星期一
16R
47. You must make your students study.
48. This metal can be bent easily into any shape.
49. He had a chance to see a good movie while he was in town.
50. The rock crashed through the window.
51. W: Did you see that ring around the moon last night? M: Yes, it was strange, wasn’t it? Q: What did they see last night?
52. M: I hear your son is in the army. What is he now? W: A sergeant. Q: What rank is her son?
53. M: Were the students on time for the examination? W: No, they were not. Q: What did the woman say about the students?
48. This metal can be bent easily into any shape.
49. He had a chance to see a good movie while he was in town.
50. The rock crashed through the window.
51. W: Did you see that ring around the moon last night? M: Yes, it was strange, wasn’t it? Q: What did they see last night?
52. M: I hear your son is in the army. What is he now? W: A sergeant. Q: What rank is her son?
53. M: Were the students on time for the examination? W: No, they were not. Q: What did the woman say about the students?
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